Today we get to do Murder Scene Blogfest, hosted by Anne Riley. This is from the [unwritten] third book of my Roulette series (and is very rough!). Technically, this is murder, but both (surviving) characters you will see are FBI agents - and this guy had it coming. Had someone not shot him first, he'd have killed Kasia without question. Luka has a very personal bone to pick with this guy, and he does it here.
Oh, and yeah, I cheated - if this looks familiar, it's because I posted it a while back.
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Oh, and yeah, I cheated - if this looks familiar, it's because I posted it a while back.
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Comments
Nicole - Glad you like it, thanks.
Diane - You should try, it's fun.
SarahJayne - Thanks, I liked that last one myself :)
I hope Luka is alright in there!
Great work.
Jemi - I had no idea it was her father until she looked to her left (and up - he's 6'5, that's what clued me in on who!) as I was writing that scene! Thanks.
Raquel - that was one of my favorite bits. Thanks.
Amalia - I was hoping that bit worked, yea. Thank you.
Anne - Thanks for hosting.
Charity - Thank you, this is the kind of scene that needs the tension to carry it through, glad it did.
Heather - Thank you.
Shelley - Nervous for the MC is always good in a scene like this. Thanks.
I also really liked "I let out the breath I'd been holding" because I did at that point too. lol.
Great post :~)