The Rules
I think the biggest obstacle writers face is trying to follow The Rules. Panic over following those bastards can lead to something worse: not being able to write at all for fear you're doing it "wrong." Thing is, they don't really exist, The Rules. They aren't really real. And there are far too many of them floating around, with a ridiculous amount of conflicting views for each.
Also, I happen to agree with many of those Fake Rules.
BUT, butbutbutbut...
The most important thing you can do as a writer is to write the story, without thinking about anything other than the story, and writing it.
Then edit it. Then edit again, and again, ad nauseam.
Don't worry about whether it falls between 67,432 words and 72,333 words exactly. Just make sure how ever many damn words you have count. Every one of them (which is going to give the story the number of words it needs). *
Read each sentence as a separate entity and don't worry if you used "to be." Instead, ask yourself if that is the strongest verb you can use (sometimes it is).
Make sure you really need that adverb to get the point across (chances are you don't, but sometimes they work--voice comes to mind). **
In the end, those Fake Rules exist because they help with the craft of writing, but they won't help you write the story.
What do you think is the hardest rule to follow?
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*The first time I stumbled across the word-count rule for genres-- after writing the horrid 150,000+ first draft of my first contemporary romance novel that I so thought was ready to be pubbed on the spot--I freaked out and went through my MS and deleted every extra "that" and contracted every possible phrase I could. This is not what's meant by cutting words. <cough>
**I happen to be a prolific adverb-voice user. This seems to happen with snarky female characters. And I haz those in spades.
Also, I happen to agree with many of those Fake Rules.
BUT, butbutbutbut...
The most important thing you can do as a writer is to write the story, without thinking about anything other than the story, and writing it.
Then edit it. Then edit again, and again, ad nauseam.
Don't worry about whether it falls between 67,432 words and 72,333 words exactly. Just make sure how ever many damn words you have count. Every one of them (which is going to give the story the number of words it needs). *
Read each sentence as a separate entity and don't worry if you used "to be." Instead, ask yourself if that is the strongest verb you can use (sometimes it is).
Make sure you really need that adverb to get the point across (chances are you don't, but sometimes they work--voice comes to mind). **
In the end, those Fake Rules exist because they help with the craft of writing, but they won't help you write the story.
What do you think is the hardest rule to follow?
***
*The first time I stumbled across the word-count rule for genres-- after writing the horrid 150,000+ first draft of my first contemporary romance novel that I so thought was ready to be pubbed on the spot--I freaked out and went through my MS and deleted every extra "that" and contracted every possible phrase I could. This is not what's meant by cutting words. <cough>
**I happen to be a prolific adverb-voice user. This seems to happen with snarky female characters. And I haz those in spades.
Comments
I once wrote a story with almost no 'to be' words like 'was.' My critique partners made me put some in because it read odd.
Cherie--guidelines yes. I'd meant to find one of those Jack Sparrow memes to post with this and forgot. ;)
Chris, I've noticed mega best sellers who've been around 20+ years get away with breaking many rules. I also find I can no longer read them in a lot of cases because the writing is subpar. Makes me wonder how they landed where they did!
Debra, I haven't read that, but have always used the term SFD. I think I got it years ago from a writing website I used to frequent.
Thank you, Sandra. :)
Lidy, that's a great way to look at it.
Anna from elements of emaginette
Yes, Patsy. edit, edit, edit. Ugh. ;)
Still, it's nice to know the guidelines, even if we chose not to follow them all. (We're rebels!)
I'm in the midst of my "ad nauseum" editing stage now. I think I can see the light at the end of the tunnel. Hopefully, it isn't an oncoming train. :)
Tamara, other than my first ever novel, I have the opposite problem--I always need add words while editing.
Cheers - Ellen
Ellen, rules are definitely made to be broken. ;)